Thursday, August 8, 2013

Creative story

        Prologue

Year 2198. 1 year before the destruction of planet Bearagoon, Bearagoons started to make a gigantic spaceship. With improved technology, they
 finished making in 11 month. As soon as it turn on their engines, the planet started to cut in half and magma came out and burned all the land. Only ten thousand and 
five thousand Bearagoon were boarding on the ship . Their only hope was to find another plant to live.                                                                    
 

This is the Bearagoons ^

Chapter 1 

  Running out of everything
 "Dr. bear, we have a serious problem. We are running out of gas, water and food" One bear told him
 " hum....maybe we can stop in that planet... send some bearagoons, check if there is a sign of other creature's there.
If there is no sign of them, then get some water and food."
Dr. Bear commanded
 "What about the gas, where should we get it?"Another bear asked him
 "what? you are an admiral and you don't know?Come on, this is our gas. Tomato."said doctor bear.

 "well then, sir, Hey you! send some warriors right now and check this planet if there is any sign of creatures!"Admiral ordered other Bearagoons.
This is Bearagoon warriors. 

Chapter 2 
Attack of some "thing"

 "BANG!....BANG!...." as soon as the warriors went out there was a large sound of something.
 "What is this? Admiral find some information about this place." Doctor bear asked. 
 "yes and we did that ten minutes ago and we found nothing."
Admiral answered
 "Contact with our warriors! Just tell them to bring some food and tomatoes. we will get the water! GO GO GO! Get some water!"
1 hour later they came back. But as soon as they turn on the engine, something grabbed their spaceship.
 "What the heck?"Admiral shouted
 "shut up! we can handle them, shoot the cannons!"
 "Boom....Boom!...."
 "Power up the engines!!!" Doctor Bear shouted
The space ship was released, but when they saw the back of the space ship, they saw something "interesting".

     Chapter 3 
  something interesting..

    When they saw the back, more than 300 spaceship was following them.
 "This is not interesting at all!"Admiral shouted, again
"Shut up! don't panic! we will figure out the way out of this stuff!" Doctor Bear growled.
 "Get some information about that ships, we will get them if we can. Admiral! prepare the silver bear warrior!!" Doctor bear commanded him.
 "Sir, we got it. Type F, weak ones, only for tactical. We can handle it."Admiral answered. This is Silver Bear warrior.
 Well, their is other  warriors like ruby, sapphire,emerald,
diamond and gold.


 They sent out 200 of them, and it worked, but 100 of them died. Then, they kept start to find another planet......

 To be continue.........



2 comments:

  1. I like your story, but please don't publish your post before the teacher or I check it, Daniel.

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  2. Daniel, your story is very good, but your endings are incomplete. Please work on your story endings.

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